i sent a few paragraphs to a couple people for editing. three actually. of each (people and paragraphs)... the first person picked out this and that to hate, hate with such abandon the words should be burned, the ashes eaten, then pooped from an airplane covering the planet with the shame of such writing... the next person picked the same this and that to love, hoping the words could be written in neon, written in that same sky the first person saw as shame... the third person thought it was all perfect. 

im sure each is wrong.